Tuesday, 10 June 2014

WALT Re-craft

In Nic's writing group we had a discussion about what a writer does to re craft their writing. We came up with these criteria:

- Re-read it.
- Re-read it AGAIN out loud.
- Mix it up, change it round.
- Fix it up. (Capital letters, punctuation, spelling)
- Change repeated words or sentence starters.
- Add stuff! (To add detail for the reader!) 
- Can you break it up? (Paragraphs?)
- Subject Specific Vocabulary
- Finally, give it to a buddy and they re-read it out loud

Check out Mitchell's re-craft!

1 comment:

  1. Thanks for sharing Poutama. I can see how you have made it easier for me to read and added the detail to help me understand, with clarity, the concept of thermal energy. Well done Mitchell.