Thursday, 3 November 2016

Red Fox and Marly

Some of you may remember Bella and Ana from Poutama last year. During iTime, they started writing a collaborative story about two girls (based on themselves) who were secret agents able to control animals.

The story never got completed last year and Red Fox and Marly sat on the shelf (in a google drive) stuck at Chapter 6. After nearly a year long break, the adventure continues and they want YOUR feedback. Troy has read a few of the chapters to some of you and those who have missed out or want to read the full story can check it out here.

If you have any feedback/feedforward for the girls, I know they would love to hear from you. Post a comment and who knows, maybe Bella or Ana may write your ideas into their story.

Here are some of the animals that pop up in the story so you know who is who.

1 comment:

  1. Great stor soo far. Something that you could improve is who gets sacrificed in chapter 9